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Hi, How are you? it’s so good to hear your voice again
I’m fine, how are you? I’ve missed you more than you know
Good good... How long’s it been?
Seven months and some not that I’ve been counting
That long, huh? how did time go so fast?
So...
So.
silence stretches and nothing is said
We’re both perfectly happy to sit,
To just be,
Comfortable with nothing more.

So...
So. the question must be asked
Why’d you call? why stir up all I tried so hard to bury?
I just wanted to talk. this just talking means so much to me
Well, what shall we talk about? everything and nothing.  Just don’t stop talking to me.
How did all of this come about?
How indeed?!
Taken by surprise and
Swept along for the ride
Why couldn’t’ we see this coming?
And would we have done any different
If we had?

I couldn’t say. caught in a storm with nothing but paper to shelter under
Good to know where we stand then.
shadowed by the heel of all those above us,
And where can we go from here?
No way but forward,
Forget the past
And feelings best left behind.

Gotta go now.  Talk to you tomorrow?
or may be not
Of course...
©2008-2009 ~bibigirl
:iconbibigirl:

Author's Comments

Kind of like a phone call i actually had a while ago. Most of it didn't happen... like the bits in italics :D
tell me what you think. pretty much exactly how i wrote it on the train the other day :D yay for the sketch book and the pen!!!

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i like it, its understandable and is full emotion.
:iconangeleyes2480:
Ah, sweet love. Wait, what the hell am I talking about?! :lol:

This is a nice show of the things we actually say, and all the things we never could say. Really nicely done, my dear. :)

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"...You have to set up the right atmosphere for women."-Kagome-

"Atmosphere...as in clouds and stuff??"-Inuyasha-


"Luke MacDonald, no relation to the restaurant."-Luke MacDonald-

"Any relation to the farm?"-Jason Stackhouse-True Blood
:iconbibigirl:
thank you.

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:psychotic: :chainsaw:

... and i wonder why people think i'm scary...
:iconbibigirl:
:D

thank you. pretty much what i was thinking. thank you again :D

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:psychotic: :chainsaw:

... and i wonder why people think i'm scary...
:iconangeleyes2480:
My pleasure! :) It's always nice to read your works. :)

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"...You have to set up the right atmosphere for women."-Kagome-

"Atmosphere...as in clouds and stuff??"-Inuyasha-


"Luke MacDonald, no relation to the restaurant."-Luke MacDonald-

"Any relation to the farm?"-Jason Stackhouse-True Blood
:iconbibigirl:
^^

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:psychotic: :chainsaw:

... and i wonder why people think i'm scary...
:iconcalander:
Think we've all been there, lol infact it kinda happend to me the other night, been a couple of years since I'd heard from this person and wolah, out of the blue a phonecall. What you say in this poem is too true.

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It's better to know nothing than to know what ain't so

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:iconbibigirl:
ah... except i was the one making the phone call :D
that it is.

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:psychotic: :chainsaw:

... and i wonder why people think i'm scary...
:iconcalander:
Ahhhhh

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It's better to know nothing than to know what ain't so

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