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I love you,
You love me.
I watch you,
You watch me.
I want you,
You want me.
I am alive,
Because you’re with me.
©2008-2009 ~bibigirl
:iconbibigirl:

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This is the sequel to [link] by me :D i wrote it last year some time. don't think this was what i was thinking at the time. not really what i'm thinking right now. i just decided to submit it when clearing out my folders.

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:iconangeleyes2480:
This is a smooth follow-up frm your last poem, which I really liked too, by the way! :D It simply states something so deep and complex. :) Nice job, hon!

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"...You have to set up the right atmosphere for women."-Kagome-

"Atmosphere...as in clouds and stuff??"-Inuyasha-


"Luke MacDonald, no relation to the restaurant."-Luke MacDonald-

"Any relation to the farm?"-Jason Stackhouse-True Blood
:iconbibigirl:
thank you. simplicity is what i was aiming for, for all the complexity of the topic. :glomp: !

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:psychotic: :chainsaw:

... and i wonder why people think i'm scary...
:iconangeleyes2480:
:D Well, mission accomplished! :thumbsup:

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"...You have to set up the right atmosphere for women."-Kagome-

"Atmosphere...as in clouds and stuff??"-Inuyasha-


"Luke MacDonald, no relation to the restaurant."-Luke MacDonald-

"Any relation to the farm?"-Jason Stackhouse-True Blood
:iconbibigirl:
Thanks! :D

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:psychotic: :chainsaw:

... and i wonder why people think i'm scary...
:iconcalander:
I like the other one much better.
I'm just not a lovey soppy type, but for those who are its perfect, it would make for a geat valentines card!:heart:

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It's better to know nothing than to know what ain't so

Clubs [link]
:iconbibigirl:
thanks :D
ha ha, i'm not actually a lovey soppy type other. stop laughing! despite the stuff i put up here, you start talking emotion at me and i sprint the other way :D
but thanks for the valentines comment :D

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:psychotic: :chainsaw:

... and i wonder why people think i'm scary...
:iconcalander:
:music: Must be love love love
:P

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It's better to know nothing than to know what ain't so

Clubs [link]
:iconbibigirl:
:D

although now i hate you. how do i get that song out of my head?!

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:psychotic: :chainsaw:

... and i wonder why people think i'm scary...
:iconatpeace:
You herf how can youdo something so simple and still be bloody good? :D

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"I am not free if I am autonomous, because the ego is the most tyrannical of rulers." - Lesslie Newbigin, VC (Very Clever)

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